We walk back and forth bringing the fire wood to the newly made fire on the beach. Our exhaustion made us so tired we collapsed and fell on the beach on our last trip back from the forest. The day became night as we relaxed on the beach. We both stayed in a hut along with Ralph and Piggy. It was dark the moon shined brightly and we said our good nights.
"Sam," said Eric.
"Yes," answered Sam,
"Good night!"
"Sweet dreams-"
"Don't let the-"
"Bed bugs-"
"Bite!" said SamnEric.
Ralph just said, "Good night guys."
The cold breeze hit us and we huddled together to get warmth. The trees and branches shake and move to make noises at night. Ralph heard different noises and tells Piggy to be quiet and shut up but Piggy had an asthma attack. We all heard whispers through the few minutes until the attack. Jack and his hunters started to call Piggy and they made it seem as if it was the beastie calling for prey. They finally stopped and came into our hut. Ralph was fighting someone but we did not know who. We were fighting as well but who?After the fight they ran away and had taken Piggy's glasses. The next morning Ralph and Piggy wanted to confront Jack about the glasses and the fire. So we set off to castle rock the home of the Savages.
The walk over there was frightening. We all walked together, the remaining few. The cliffs and rocks seemed sharp so we stayed close to each other hoping not to fall at all. When we got to the front of Castle Rock, Roger one of the guards said, "Who goes there?"
Ralph replied, "You know who I am!" But Roger still refused to let them in. Ralph asked where Jack was and they said that he was hunting another pig for a feast again. But as soon as we knew it Jack came running towards us with his hunters and spears. Ralph and Jack talked for a little but the Ralph called Jack a thief and sparked a fight. They were fighting with their spears and stabbing each other. Jack got Ralph in the ribs. The fight was very intense. After the fight they were still yelling. Jack told his hunters to get us. They surrounded us and tied us up together. Piggy started to plead to speak but everyone said, "BOO!!" Roger who was on the top of Castle Rock was next to a big bolder that was propped up on the ledge. Roger got so mad at Piggy that he pulled the lever and the big bolder hit Piggy and broke the conch. Piggy flew up in the air and hit the rocks in the water near the cliffs. His head was cracked open and started to bleed with his bloody brains coming out. The blood went into the water and it turned into a dark red at first but then a light pink color. That sight was horrifying to watch. After Ralph saw what happened to Piggy he ran for his life leaving us behind with Jack and the Savages. Once Ralph was gone Jack's Savages took us into the fort and Jack started to threaten us. If we didn't join his tribe we would get hurt.
We said, "That is-"
"Not the-"
"Right way!"
And Jack said, "What is not the right way?"
"You shouldn't-"
"Threaten us."
Roger started to step into the conversationa and took over. He threatened us even more.
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Hi sheryl!...this is meg, im gonna comment on your blog even thought ur not in my class. I thought your blog was really descriptive. You showed Samneric's emotions and explained the scenery well. I thought you did the a really good job with dialogue. You made sure that they inturupted eachother like the normally would. AWESOMENESS BLOG!!! BE HAPPY!!!
-meg was NOT here
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